Played/read your story, and it was a great one. It feels very real - and you indeed said it's "mostly true". Thank you for writing it~
To anyone else who finished once: one of the three endings is completely different from the other two, and is worth playing again for.
Minor nitpicks for the author:
* The intentional waits were a tiny bit annoying on the repeated playthroughs
* I'm not a native speaker, but I think the verbs used with gender-neutral 'they' should work in the same way as plural 'they'. For instance, "They doesn't notice you" should probably be "They don't ...". Same with "they hurriedly begins speaking". (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Singular_they)
In terms of typos/errors (especially singular verbs for the plural they), I've noticed quite a few over the last couple of months of feedback, and at some point when I'm done with a few current projects I'll go back and correct them. The waits are annoying, I agree, and while I don't think I'll be removing them entirely I am looking for a way to make them skippable.
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Played/read your story, and it was a great one. It feels very real - and you indeed said it's "mostly true". Thank you for writing it~
To anyone else who finished once: one of the three endings is completely different from the other two, and is worth playing again for.
Minor nitpicks for the author:
* The intentional waits were a tiny bit annoying on the repeated playthroughs
* I'm not a native speaker, but I think the verbs used with gender-neutral 'they' should work in the same way as plural 'they'. For instance, "They doesn't notice you" should probably be "They don't ...". Same with "they hurriedly begins speaking". (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Singular_they)
Hi! I'm glad you enjoyed the story~
In terms of typos/errors (especially singular verbs for the plural they), I've noticed quite a few over the last couple of months of feedback, and at some point when I'm done with a few current projects I'll go back and correct them. The waits are annoying, I agree, and while I don't think I'll be removing them entirely I am looking for a way to make them skippable.
Thank you for playing!!